by dan_kildall
It has taken me a couple of days to read all 16 chapters...can't put it down...salivating over what happens next!!!!! Great story...incredible characters and all the sex, passion, sensuality along with "what is going to happen next"...favorite long story!
This is in my Top 5 series on the site I just love it. Can't wait for next chapter, just love when chapter have loads of pages hate when its only one.
ive been keeping up on this story for a while and love it so far although a little far fetched that this kid can land all these ladies is out there a ways , didnt particularity like having the father with sandi even though she sounds like a slut and i hope amys father doesnt get in all the action as i personally like just mom and son together i took a chance on this story and got tangled up in a great story great read also i like the fact the young man doesnt like to share his women with anybody i like that cant wait for the next chapter keep up the great writing
Really enjoyed the story so far, Amy is a really wonderful character. I am so sorry I never had an aunt like Sandi and a girlfriend like Amy when I was growing up in my teens!
Is there any update on when we can expect to see chapter 17 published?
Thanks for a really good read so far.
I was thinking, there has GOT to be more and if this story is at all real, you're very brave/foolhardy to tell it. I'm going to assume that you, Sandi, and Amy all are together and living out happy lives, and that means your kids are in a very loving family.
What can I say other than, "Well done."? I've read every word of every chapter and I'm still on the edge of my seat waiting for more. Please keep up the incredible work! As a writer myself I know what a bitch writer's block can be, but I must selfishly beg you to power through these periods and just keep on pumping out these long, immersive, and thoroughly incredible chapters.
Great Work. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!
I just got home and saw the update that Ch. 17 is complete (unfortunately, though, still under final editing, so it's not posted yet). I literally screamed "YES!!!" and pumped my fist in the air. Words cannot describe how fucking excited I am to read the continuation of my favorite erotic story of all time. Dan Kildall, I fucking mean it when I say, "You, Sir, can write." I pray Ch. 17 isn't the conclusion (I mean, come on, how could it be?) and that you continue to grace us with many, many additional chapters. Godspeed.
To me it seems Amy loves Sandi more than Danny. Everything runs through Sandi. Just a thought
Great story. What happens when reality does not meet the expectations of fantasy or fantasy turns out to be better than reality?