by buster352
Hot story, please keep going. I would love to know just how this relationship develops
All aunts and nephews should experience such beautiful uninhibited love.
"Aunt Sarah was my mum's sister. No doubt she still is."
When would she not be?
Every now and then I come across a well written story, but most amuse me and I wonder about the authors, 'do these guys/gals think they are good writers?'
You hinted at taking control. I like that approach and perhaps Aunt Sarah will like it too. I hope you keep writing.
Please accept all of your reader feedback as positive suggestions, but remember you will never be able to please everyone. The plain truth is that you are probably your own worst critic.
I have written 17 chapters consisting of over 65,000 words and have yet to submit even the first chapter. Thank for submitting this story. Perhaps it is the encouragement I need to get me off my arse. Please keep writing.