by TheseLegs
Typical crap written by a chronic masterbater for chronic masterbaters. Get a better hobby
I really enjoyed this story. Good build up and good plot. Hope you write more parts!
Great story hope you write more on these two I want to hear about how his home coming goes and maybe they can't keep away from each other and mommy finds out
He was such a mewling litle weenie at the beginning of the story that I couldn't read the rest. Amazing hiow many writers here use that trope but have the character end up being some kind of master swordsman.