All Comments on 'Aunt's Plan Ch. 05'

Nice to see Mom getting more involved. Interested in seeing where this goes. Enjoying your series.

Please keep it going with a lot more chapters. You're doing a great job. Thank you

Really enjoyed this chapter and the story as a whole. Definitely hope to see more going forward

I think this series would have been better served as one piece rather than several piecemeal chapters. That would have enabled the author to form a more coherent story and check the grammar properly. There's no build up or suspense, the action takes place within the first couple of thousand words, 'just because'. It's unfortunately like so many of the stories on here in that it just jumps into the sex without setting a scene or framing why the characters would act like this. It just isn't believable in any sense. Some of the writing is ok, there is some promise there.

I do not agree with anonymous that it "needs work." I think you have done the buildup quite nicely. I am enjoying reading your work. Thank you for sharing it with us,

OMG yes that was so fucking good 100% HOT thank you so much ! ! ! !

"I sat on the table (a chair by the table), " Why not write "I sat at the table?" People do realize tables usually have chairs.

"She lied on her back " Who was she lying to? She laid on her back.