All Comments on 'Aunty Sue Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good sex but the Grammar sucks!

The author's misuse of PRONOUNS is deplorable. Nothing is ever done FOR SHELLY and "I". Things are doe for SHELLY AND ME!!

MYSELF IS not an objective pronoun either.

The author must be VERY YOUNG! Maybe he will learn in time.

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