by RaptorDreaming
Holy shit mate. That’s a good yarn. Hope you’ve gotsomethinh on the boil for your next saga. A bloody good read. Thnx
Thanks for the interest Anonymous. Chapter 11 is waiting in the wings while I wonder whether the effort is worth the fairly modest uptake. These things write themselves at the end of the day.
Well the Al D or whatever it's called part of this story has been pretty good what with the escape and all, good dialogue action and humor. The first part of this story I found it almost impossible to follow. Maybe it's just me with what few brain cells I have left, thanks to a little whiskey wine over the last 60 years or so, also take it easy on the longer sex scenes it really is just a detour from the story.
Time to put out chapter 11 (and 12) as a nice ending to the series. It’s been a good read
Hey mate, where’s chat 11? You cant leave us hanging and you,be had almost a year and still a lot left to tell.
Hmm... these stories represent such a huge investment in time, yet have received such a modest response I have been wondering whether the effort is actually worthwhile. Chapter 11 is gathering dust in the bottom of the drawer while I work on other material. Who knows... maybe later...
I think you have done an awesome job. I like to dialogue, and how you have build up suspense. I happen to come across your story. And I’m glad I did. It’s been a great read so far. If there’s more, please bring it on.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us