All Comments on 'Aurora University Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great but rushed

Great story! Good beginning but then it felt rushed... I felt the dinner scene was understated as well as the description of the bedroom.

The sex seem rushed and a bit unrealistic... no foreplay

Very good submission for your first one! I hope to read more.chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sexy story

I thought it was perfect. Great idea on the plot too. You should add magic to it though, such as a self controlled dildo. Or maybe a class?

Either way this made me squirt huge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
really good

Plot is a bit rushed but its good

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good begining

Loved it would like to read more

MegamuffinMegamuffinalmost 8 years ago
Work in some magic and this could be pretty fun.

Did Chloe's tits get bigger on the way back to the room? ;)

Anyway this could be really fun with some weird porny magic powers and elaborate sex challenges instead of like... midterms and stuff.

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