by chloe69
Great story! Good beginning but then it felt rushed... I felt the dinner scene was understated as well as the description of the bedroom.
The sex seem rushed and a bit unrealistic... no foreplay
Very good submission for your first one! I hope to read more.chapters
I thought it was perfect. Great idea on the plot too. You should add magic to it though, such as a self controlled dildo. Or maybe a class?
Either way this made me squirt huge.
Did Chloe's tits get bigger on the way back to the room? ;)
Anyway this could be really fun with some weird porny magic powers and elaborate sex challenges instead of like... midterms and stuff.