by RobertaBob
That was hella fun. And quite possibly a real situation a couple of decades down the line at most.
Ha. It was certainly different. Right now I'm wearing a "TeslaBot" T-shirt. Perhaps a sign of things to come in the future. (or Cum). Anyway, very creative. Many thanks for the laugh. Cheers.
5* just on originality alone. Very different from the norm & entertaining. LMFAO when he got the Betty & the explanation to his wife.
This is perhaps a first humorous LW entry that I've finished. A great relaxing laugh, thank you
Good parameters all around. Quite enjoyable in its idiocy. Five stars. ~~JB Edwards
Love it! The internet became what it is today because of porn sites. Home use robotics will follow that path sooner than you think! Five stars!
And maybe prescient. In the not to distant future there will be programmable fuckbots. Why have sex with a real person when you can have exactly what you want from a droid?
I found myself wanting to write 'cute story', but cute doesn't describe it. The story line, the dialogues expressed, the mannerisms so typical human, the humor throughout- you are getting really good at this. Wish I had your imagination, and you get another 5 from me.
Just wanted to add that some or most of the commenters who don't like this story will hate it because of their innate insecurities.
That was a really good, fun story. 5*, of course. It was different, though I kind of wondered if Betty and Mark 2 would get it on together.
Creative and fun. It could have gone full metal sinister but you kept it light with a side order of wisdom to chew on later in bed …
Nice light fun story among the heavy serious endevours that frequent this site. loved it.
OMG, how weird are the authors, therapy is too late for you lol
Very silly and clearly a couple of old bots
JJ
This story, was way out there...but very good!
I liked the way both husband and wife learned, from the mistakes they made, and both got a ring-side seat on the way cheating of any kind, even with AI toys as described in this story, can tear a marriage, so quickly apart.
I was glad, by story end, they got rid of the extravagant sex toys, and went back to being good girls and boys, still married and in love and satisfied with each other, at home, once again!
Now that was fun.
its a rare treat when an author uses a bit of imagination and effort to put forth a decent story, regardless of subject.
Truly a funny enjoyable ride.
Now I'll return to my regularly scheduled removal of cocks out of cucks asses.
Isn't there a Humor category? Or maybe Erotic Couplings? There was no adultery, no cheating, more of a Fantasy/Science Fiction story. The brain is the most important sex organ, if you have a brain. Your characters were as robotic as the sexbots they were using: Stick Tab A into Slot B and, Shazam, galactic orgasm. Who needs a brain, in this story? A decent attempt at Humor, but it wasn't in that category. A pretty stupid Loving Wives story, and rated according. But thanks for the effort.
That was a good one, and it was hilarious. You have a pretty good range in your writing and it will be interesting to see what you do next.
This was a really fun story. Of course, the sex toys lack in the human interaction category, but could easily be addictive. Surprised the wife didn’t lose her job due to tanking productivity.
Fantastic, hilarious and a genuine LW story. Good command of the English language.
Great story, although I believe I'm suffering from a bout of moderate Uncanny Valley, right now.
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Ingenious!!! 5++++++/5!
This story was cute, funny, original, imaginative, and well written. Kudos!
Thanks for writing!
A very well told story that on the one hand made me laugh out loud, but on the other hand it made me very thoughtful. In 20 years, exactly what you said so funny will be normal. There will be cyborgs designed and made for just that. And social "speechlessness" will increase. The people who hardly care about the "other" today will sink even more into their self-chosen loneliness. Perhaps this development may lessen sexual assaults, perhaps also sex murders, but one thing it will certainly do, people will become even more lonely!
What happens when you have competing masturbation units, male and female. They fall in love and fuck their existence away! Too much technology only hinders mankind’s evolution.
Very amusing and creative. Thank you! 5 stars, of course. Forget the grumpy category discussions, I don't care where you place your stories.
can they even feel each other anymore? this was a B low budget movie btw forgot the name. except it was more about the love not sex
Fairly original. Seems like I remember a story where the husband considers himself in competition with her "wand", only it was NOT a lighthearted tale. Glad to see them stay together, it could have gone another direction. Full marks, Thanks for posting.
Its only a matter of time, and adaptation. Glad I won't be here. Thanks for the effort.
5*. No, 10*!!
2 additional stars for this one alone : "Mr. Peeples reflected that he needed to change employers."
That was spectacular and I have my broker ready to pounce when these things go public.
Especially in this time of legitimate concern about the pernicious effect of ultra-right-wing nationalism, I think it would behoove us all to avoid casual use of "Nazi" (as in "category Nazi"). Thanks a lot, Seinfeld.
Creative. And why was the wife a crazy bitch? Yes she was addicted to her fuckbot. Just like husbands addicted to porn. Sure if it continued, their marriage was on trouble due to jealousy and insecurity. And she certainly was into the increased usage and size settings. But humans when provided with a toy that gives them great pleasure, whether a man or a woman, will have trouble resisting it. So she isn't crazy. And while she was at times a hypocrite, she wasn't a bitch. She was an addict. Obsessed with her sex toy. And looks like hubby was on his way too. They were doing parallel fucks with their bots for a couple of weeks. Unfortunately they were definitely on a path to divorce, because we human beings are jealous. And for good reason. If a spouse was hooked on using a toy and watching porn to the exclusion of sex with his/her partner (Mark 2 was starting to crimp their sexy time quite a bit), then thr marriage is in trouble. She was addicted and the pleasure high was starting to warp the marriage and affect how she viewed the machine. He had a better upgraded female model,.and he could certainly see the allure. In reality, they would have fought and argued a lot more. But the author wanted to draw out the symmetry on purpose. Creative story. Healthy marriages between wealthy couples in the not too distant future are doomed, whether due to sexbots or VR.
Anonymous from 9 months ago with the co.ment starting with "Creative.." has an excellent analysis of this story. The wife had an addiction. The hsuband was catching up with Betty despite coming late to the party. In reality Betty was a bigger threat with her upgrades. The Mark II was an advanced dildo. The wife often used in the Mark II in the same position. Regardless they were headed to divorce wmdue to jealousy. Future marriages will have real challenges. Expect women will prefer sex androids as they will want emotional intimacy (at least for a while) to be separated clean between spouse and sex robot. Men will love out their fantasies in VR. Essentially a radical upgrade of porn addiction. Of course who knows what comes first and what wins out. I doubt it will be traditional marriage, if the human race lives that long.
"Shut up, you bitch!" Mrs. Peeples hissed.
Betty paused moaning and replied, "I would not even be here if you were a better wife."
=====> Classic!!
If Open AI buys into Boston Dynamics (or vice versa), Katy bar the door. The bedroom door.