All Comments on 'Autumn Leaves Are Turning'

Since it plainly states,

"I was so confused. I'd never even had sex with a guy, and yet here I was picturing dirty thoughts with me and another woman, whom I had just met!"

How could she,

"...never go back to relationships with men."

And since she had never had sex with a guy, how would she know that,

"There was no way that I could give such pleasure, or receive such pleasure, from a man."

Such closed mindedness/ignorance is very unbecoming.

Not bad for a first attempt, you should go back and proofread it. Also the story itself is pretty bland, but the details for the sex were pretty good!

I agree with the other comment. Like the lesbian scene, but it seems like you wrote it in one go and didn't proofread it. The sex scene really hot though. ;)

Try to make the story interesting too.