All Comments on 'Ava Chronicles: Friend's Dad'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Interesting

Well woven tale.

Tallygirl1Tallygirl1almost 9 years ago
Very good story

This was good, but sad. I think we're innately conditioned to want the 'happily ever after.'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Dang...

I was kinda hoping he would file for divorce and they'd end up together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Very well done. I was especially pleased with the way that the ending seemed to defy all previous expectations. Wonderfully written.

Coco51Coco51over 2 years ago

Well written and unexpected.

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