All Comments on 'Ava's Corrupting Camping Trip Ch. 03'

Damn, what an incredible read!!!

I hope, before this story runs its course, Mr. Shafer takes Ava on a biz trip and uses her to 'close the deal'. Ideally, complete with high end lingerie

This is my favorite active series on the site. Love seeing the transformative of Ava. Hoping Jake plays a bigger role in the next chapter.

I'd rather the series return to Ava and Jake. And she should do things like blow off their date night just to get fucked by Jake.

But if you're going to keep finding new guys for her to fuck, I suggest: Kyle's friends; their neighbour; or that jerk that Kyle works with.

This was incredibly hot, for sure. I do long for more of that passionate-romantic-tension sex between just Ava and Jake in the next chapter though.

Loving this series but I’m hoping Jake makes a return

I hope Tom comes back and wrecks all her holes. I squirmed so much reading that scene

Wow..... Absolutely loved all the chapters.... Can't wait for the next part

my inner slut is so turned on!

Just finished the first three installments. I have to agree with Sirena831, and am waiting for the next installment. When will Kyle wise up? Will he accept things? Will Jake help him realize it's all good? And when the fuck is Ava going to go on birth control? She is headed for a horrible crash. Fifteen stars for the first three installments, at least from me. ~~JB Edwards

This is my favorite series so far on this site. There's been no update since end of October, so I'm hoping that this series gets more parts to it.

i hope she gets super clap stupid cunt

Didn't love the first two chapters, but this one was excellent. Looking forward to more.

I so hope this isn’t ending here. When can we expect more’n

I love Ava! I love the journey she’s been on, from the willingly dominated, to the (slightly) in-control temptress. I must have more of her exploits, there are so many stories to tell. Kyle has to find out her darkest secrets, there must be consequences for her actions. Please come back with chapter four soon…

More of this deliciously depraved slut please!!! She's obviously just hitting her stride. She's only just begun to draw Kyle into her sticky web and get him to want her to be more openly slutty for him and allow even more naughty play with Jake while Kyle watches and strokes himself then fucks her for Jake to watch. Thanks for a Great story series!!!

I know it has been 8 mos, but still hoping for a pt 4.

Does the story have no continuation?

Absolutely love Ava and this journey you're taking her on. You kill it with describing her emotions and depravity. The flow of the story is well written and engrossing. I really hope to see a looooot more of Ava!!

Part 4 please!

Need more please, can’t wait for the boyf to be made a full cuck

Not a fan of blackmail

Love the slowish desent into full submissive slut. Would love to see someone like Jake or Dan take her ass and maybe some nipple rings with a connecting chain/leash to solidify her full submission. Just some inspiration for future chapters.

Thais os fvcking great. Please upload a New chapter ASAP

No more writing?

WE NEED MORE!