All Comments on 'Ava's Corrupting Camping Trip Ch. 01'

Just freaking awesome...After a long time a story has aroused me so much..

Hot story! Love the build up and story, thanks for sharing.

After a very long while got to read something that was fantastic on all fronts - story, writing style, and the sex.

- your new fan!

What’s sad is that women are really like this and would find this erotic. They have all this #metoo stuff and then they turn to story’s like this to get off.

Amazing! Please write more in this 3rd person POV, it is so hot!

I try most stories here in most genres and have done so for over a decade. Yours is one of only a handful of stories I've read here in last few years that was enjoyable. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

Wondered how it would go. Some stories in the non-con section flirt far too close to going too far, but this developed into the perfect reluctant slut story. She chose, she consented, she was corrupted and it was just hot.

Wow this was literally exactly what I was hoping to find when I opened literotica yesterday. I even made this account specifically to pay my compliments to you—and I’ve been using this website for probably 12 years lol (granted, I’m only 25, so haven’t exactly been eligible to join the whole time. 🙊🙉🙈) Thanks for contributing such quality erotic literature!

Really enjoyed this one. Hope there will be more to follow.

Incredible story! Your pacing is great. I hope there's more to this story.

oh my god! the way you describe everthing is so hot please make more

Thank you all for the feedback and comments! The positive responses to this story have encouraged me to get to work on a follow up for Ava, so that will be coming in a few weeks or so.

This needs to be on video! Great detail, awesome storyline!

This was one of the best stories I've read on it in a long time!! The build up was perfect, the writing was not overly detailed, but not so general where it could get boring, and each scene progressively got better. It had a little bit of everything too, e.g., cheating, regular sex, oral, public masturbating's, gangbang, and breeding. Stories that I genuinely imagine myself in are the best. Thank you for it, and I'm hoping to read more of Ava and more of your other stories too!

I would have liked the story a whole lot more, if Kyle had shot all those guys dead in the morning, but that's just me.

what I don't understand about fucking cheaters is, if she liked jake why the fuck not live with him and leave kyle alone. Why ruin someone else's life? dumb ass shit!

Great story and very well written. Thanks for sharing.

Great story with a sexy whore. I wonder if she made kyle go down on her when they got back to their camp and lick the cum out of her sloppy wet hole

I did something close to this at a no tell motel with 5 guys from a construction crew and you were pretty accurate, lol. Loved every minute of my own experience and your story.

Absolutely fantastic!! Extremely well-written and totally engrossing!! Your delightful story telling actually has me falling deeply in love with the fascinatingly slutty Ava. Ahhh, if only it were possible, I'd woo her and marry her and try to fulfill her every desire no matter how many lovers she might want/need. Thank you for a truly spell-binding fantasy!!!

I absolutely love this one.

The only way it could have hit my kinks harder would have been if Kyle had witnessed the gang fucking his girl from the shadows. And been devastated but jerked off to it.

Of course he'd think about how Ava always made him wear a condom and still finish outside, as he watched six different bare cocks penetrate his girlfriend and shoot seed inside.

Love love love!!!!

This was most excellent. Probably one of my favorites.

Her immediate willingness to allow these guys to make her, a girlfriend of 4 years, cheat, is problematic. Unrealistic.

Everything after was hot. EXCEPT for the ignorant use of the words snatch and cunt! IMMEDIATE mood killer.

Hot hot hot!! Absolutely wonderful!