All Comments on 'Ava's Corrupting Camping Trip Ch. 02'

Brilliant. This is a great series that I'm enjoying reading. Can't wait to see what happens next.

What a trip

Please continue with this series!!

Outstanding I can't wait for the next chapter best story in Literotica. Keep it going

So incredibly hot. Please write more!

Looking forward to what's next...anal...watersport...threesome?

Very lame in comparison to first series...

You're doing great, looking forward to the next chapter.

This has been absolutely awesome so far and keeps getting better. Just when you might think it has reached it's peak.there's another kinky twist!

Of course pretty soon Kyle should catch them with Jake buried nut-deep and Ava cumming.

So, I liked this story a lot, but the first one was by far better. The first one had a real conflict in Ava and each scene progressively got more daring with conflict still. This story was nice with the phone conversation between Ava and Kyle while Ava was literally cheating on him at the time and also how Jake is slowly getting Kyle to be more of a cuck I guess.

I was hoping to see Ava fight herself a lot more than she actually did in this story - there wasn't much non-content and very little reluctance. Jake is great and I think he can come back, but we should explore more of Ava's mentality after the dessert. What kind of girl does she want to be? Is it only with Jake? Were his friends a one-time thing? Does she still want to stay with Kyle? There's a lot of potential where this story can be taken like her going out with her girlfriends to a club or a work party or visiting Kyle's dad, etc etc. I think we just need more build up and mental exploration with Ava and not just jump right into the sex all the time - even though I know a lot of readers like that too (you can't make us all happy!). Oh, last thing, I do love the dialogue back and forth every time Ava is doing something sexual. The degrading things that Jake calls her is amazing! Looking forward to the next story!

Will there be any more of this at some point?

I’m sorta sad for Ava in this chapter, as the potential for a passionate romance between Ava & Jake seems dead, as does her official romantic relationship. Maybe I’m projecting, but Ava is the “loving” girlfriend, right? She’s capable of being loyal in love, of giving and receiving love, but she really wants her brains fucked out too. Her current bf can’t provide what she needs, so she sees an oasis of love and pleasure in jake. She’s realizing that good dick is a prison though, as the possibility that Jake sees her as more than a sexual object seems a lot less likely in this chapter, sadly. Sure she’s the one cheating, but she wants her cake (cakes*?) and to eat it too, and who can blame a girl? It seems the only thing she’s not consenting to now is the idea of being part of Jake’s rotation. Maybe it’s my own fantasy for her, but I think Ava’d prefer being adored, desired, and pursued strongly by both men—or perhaps she has a rotation of her own. It just feels less empowering for her to awaken sexually just to join Jake’s harem. So, I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter to see how you resolve that particular territorial tension. Also, homegirl has had a lot of sperm pumped in her, and I’m hoping to see the breeding aspect explored in some kinky ways.😏 Your writing is quite enthralling, and I hope you haven’t discontinued the series yet, Mastermon! <3

very nice. is this the end?

Best part of your stories is the conversations during sex. I just love it. I hope to see the other guys from desert too. 😁😁