All Comments on 'Average High School Life Ch. 02'

5*. You've created an x-rated jigsaw puzzle in words. Can't wait to see what it all looks like once all the pieces fall into place!

I've read enough fiction on the Internet to know bad writing, good writing and writing so good that it's noticeable.

Your writing is very good. Noticeably good. You seem to be actually crafting a story. Thank you.

I especially enjoyed the aftercare by the domme after the scene. It's important

This is weirdly good, not my normal reading, but I’m glad I stumbled into it.

Other than what feels like over the top younger teenage speak, great. Truthfully the text and slang usage makes me think of freshman in high school at oldest, but that might just be me.

The bdsm scene was really damn well written, and I sincerely hope most characters we've been introduced to are kept around and not just one and done side characters.

Really great work. Many thanks for that marvelous fairy tale (isn't it a fairy tale ?).

Five stars.

PP