All Comments on 'Average High School Life Ch. 05'

Where did this kids balls go. When i was 18 I would of thought manna from heaven not this pussy bs of something is wrong women are throwing themselves at me. Keep up th

Loving the story line - thanks - keep writing please

Love where this is going. The hesitation and freak out are good - it makes him feel more human, and heightens the subtle horror - but I’d suggest you not push it so far he feels like a complete wimp. Hoping he calls max at some point with questions, and accepts a bit of tutoring on how to take control of a situation. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love the decision to make Jay a little more hesitant, definitely feels more realistic and helps sell his inexperience. Another fantastic addition to this series, eagerly awaiting the next installment.

I agree with Anonymous. This is exactly how my average 18 years old self would have reacted to the whole thing. With reluctance and suspicion, up to a point, just like with his teacher. I disagree with some of the comments about him potentially being a wimp. Some people are like that, they go with the flow and don't try to force anything. Doesn't mean they're wimps and Jay seems to be that kind of person. Really curious about why Amy is immune, but doesn't seem to have the "power". Maybe she was close enough of the explosion, but not close enough to be fully affected.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Keep it up. The protagonist has a very realistic approach toward the whole situation. It makes it easier to get into the story. 5*

Besides the sex, I'm enjoying the mystery behind the events that you've woven into the jigsaw pieces of the story. I'm torn between wanting to know how everything fits together and hoping there are many more pieces that need to be revealed before finding out. I'm also impressed with your ability to keep the steamy scenes from becoming routine or redundant.

Dude. You ruined my wallpaper. That took me 10 minutes to pick out. 30 minutes to get the package one and read the directions and like 45 minutes to apply it (had to start over after I realized you have to clean the wall first). Now I have to scrub my bedroom wall behind my computer desk (and um... some other stuff) and paint the wall. Again.

Nice story. Lingerie. Good Lord!

Gonna pick a nit, no way does a straiggt A's valedictorian say "I've known people in bad spots and it didn't end good for them." That person says "... it didn't end WELL for them."

Thanks for toning down the sus ngls.

Intrigued by the plot, on to the next one!

Loving this story !

Change nothing, please. Five stars

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