All Comments on 'Avery Takes a Slave'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well told

Eroticism without torture and pain. How much was slavery?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
ALABAMA

I never knew we had such stars in Alabama.....love it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great work

A sexy story with genuine emotional connection

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I wonder why there is no sequel to this dynamic description of the D/s lesbian relation. It would be interesting to find out what happens in the world of young Domme and her mature obedient toy-girl. How far they will go , how will they be changed ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

More please!!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

One architectural detail is missing. A garage isn’t normally part of a house’s central air system. Play time in November in non-heated garage, even in Mobile, Alabama, is going to be distractingly cool. Likewise, any play in the summer would be like a steam room. Story is still fun, but details matter.

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