All Comments on 'Awakening Ch. 01: Summoning'

Looking forward to reading the rest... definitely hot!

What a great story. I cannot wait to read more!!

Amazing writing style, can't wait for more!!!

Please change "snuck" to "sneaked": "snuck" is the slang of the illiterate; it's beneath you and your audience.

shut the fuck up snuck is a real word in the dictionary nobody cares

WOW, great,

Beware! Succubus Marin is here to take you places you might never want/ or be able to return from. Great beginning! Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.