All Comments on 'Awakening Ch. 01: Summoning'

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Marklynda2 over 1 year ago

Beware! Succubus Marin is here to take you places you might never want/ or be able to return from. Great beginning! Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

kees10 almost 3 years ago

WOW, great,

Jaysea753 almost 3 years ago

shut the fuck up snuck is a real word in the dictionary nobody cares

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

Please change "snuck" to "sneaked": "snuck" is the slang of the illiterate; it's beneath you and your audience.

lavalamp420 about 3 years ago

Amazing writing style, can't wait for more!!!

JK1979 about 3 years ago

Absolutely love it

What a great story. I cannot wait to read more!!

DeathMaiden about 3 years ago

Looking forward to reading the rest... definitely hot!

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