All Comments on 'Awakening Elise Vol. 01'

Loved this story. You have to write more of Elise's journey with this black couple. jhilley@hotmail.com

I really liked this story. It is a very good read and a nice characterization of sex as its meant to be. Bravo xoxoxoxox Annette

I enjoyed the story and I look forward to its further development in subsequent chapters.

(I just hope that the relationships stay respectful and don't degenerate into degradation for Elise as so often happens with stories that start out this way. But that's just my story preference. It's the author's story, not mine.)

Fontaineleitner, it would be helpful if you could tell us a little more in your biographical notes. As a new author, you haven't told us much about what influences your writing.

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a well balanced story, more to follow i hope

Well paced, good balance.

Loved Volume 1, but it's been more than 6 months! Please continue!

The seduction was skillfully described and one most men could take a lesson from, including me.

Well paced and crafted writing. Love the story between an experienced black man and a young innocent white girl. The scene where he was taking time to taste and eat Elise's pussy is just so erotic!

I see you've written another series, but if you could ever get around to following-up on this, it would be greatly appreciated. The build-up is so marvelous, and I really want to see the continuation.