All Comments on 'Awakening Jenny'

Enjoyed your story. Thought the ending was too abrupt. Loved the emotional progression. Great feel for sex acts. Hope you continue writing.

with a nice slow build up that made it all the more believable... Thanks...Amy.

You did an excellent job building up the friendship then passion between your protagonists. Your sex scene was also well done.

However, with such a wonderful build up, I expected more regarding their winding down and discussion about what that meant to each other.

Keep going, you have quite a gift, thanks for sharing.

I was with a woman that could grip me like that. Sure am glad I married her the sex is fantastic.

I would say that Jen's fertile field is about ready to be planted with your seed, for a bit of growth in her belly....

Very well written and a lovely slow build up with a great deal of feeling. One of the better stories on this site

The build-up really got me hot under the collar. Nicely done. I look forward to your next story.

Fuck now I have to go clean up before I can go to work! Hot very hot!

You've covered love and sex equally well. And taken us along for the ride. Thankyou!

WOW!! You just gave me an earthshaking orgasm. Jenny is sooo lucky.... Thankyou Harper

...To an explosive finish, extremely erotic!

That as just awesome. Abrupt ending but good before that

I enjoyed this a lot. Thank you x

Very subtle seduction, well writen, and a satisfying conclusion. I hope this lead to many more encounters between Jenny and neighbour.

Great story. Enjoyed it very much. Thought it ended a little to quickly and needs a little bit more in way of a conclusion

while supporting and respecting each other.

Thanks for the romantic love story.

I enjoy stories such as this where the characters become real people in my mind.

What an absolutely wonderfully written story. It truly captures the normal, unhurried growth of love and desire between two adults. It is tastefully written, without the exaggerated scenes of lust intended only to tittilate the reader. I am twice widowed and this is how the new love grows; slowly and deeply.