All Comments on 'Awakenings'

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Wow! This has instantly become one of the all-time favorite stories on this site. So well done and truly lovely.

I really enjoyed this. Thank you!

Simply wonderful.

I love this story! So perfect, so absolutely romantically perfect! You are an amazing writer. Thank you

I love the story. I'm older and love my wife and life. If I thought she would accept me as her wife I would transition and be my true self. Love your stories

A beautiful lovely story!!

EXCELLENT!

Beautiful :)

Excellent. 5

I loved the sentiments and feelings infused throughout... just a wonderful read. Thank you

simply one of the best!!!! A true SHORT story thanks!!! Well written, believable dialogue. And perhaps every gurl's secret fantasy? Please scribble some more.

Since you asked so nicely for a comment I'll give you one ;)

Though honestly I don't have too much to say, it's like all your stories. Gorgeous girlyboy finds herself, has very hot sex and lives happily ever after. And that's great so never change and never stop!

Until next such story I will eagerly read, best of luck. : )

PS. If you take suggesting under consideration I'd love to see the protagonist of Sunburned continue his journey to being more fem.

Thanks for a fantastic and loving story - I think all gay bottom boys would relish to be love as Sophie was!

Another lovely story, a few little typos/spelling items, but so easy to forgive. More more more. 5 <3 and as many stars. Luv Chloe xxx

Holy shit I love this so much.

"Don't you dare tell me you didn't mean it, you asshole. You turned my entire world upside down. I don't know what to do about it, but don't you dare tell me it was a lie."

Simple. Elegant. Profound.

Situations where everyone is happy in the end rarely occur. It's nice to slip into your reality for a smile.

amazing

I love this so amazing

I love that you give us hope, happiness and romance in your stories. Well done as usual!!!

Goddamn that was good

A lovely story. A bit too short and rushed though. Too bad the weather was bad, a nice romantic hike would be wonderful. And some interactions with the families. But that's just me wanting to read a bit more of your writing :) Keep up the good work.

Thank you for this beautiful piece of happiness. The wedding was amazing, I am glad you wrote it this way. I am left feeling satisfied and with a smile after reading. Please, do continue to titillate and entertain us with your wonderful tales.

Wow! That was anazing!

I really enjoyed this. Keep on keeping on.

So incredibly beautiful as always. My only complaint is that you aren't supposed to cry from reading an erotic story! What can I say? I always cry at weddings when I can see that the couple is truly in love.

Beautiful story from you incredibly talented mind , loved every sentence, thank you xxx

Holy shit Shelby! I just started HRT about 3 weeks ago, and your stories really hit different. I had a lump in my throat from the line "They were all place holders."

This story really gave me the feels.

As always, the sexy bits were wonderful! You are a talented writer. I love the fairy-tale ending, where the family knew before Sophie did, and were more than just accepting, but were actively encouraging!

Thanks again for sharing your talent!

Shelby when I read your

As a 63 year old, who is pretending to be a cis hetero white male and married for 33 years to a black cis hetero old fashioned church girl. And realized that I need to transition. I loved this story. I will be reading more of your stories.

I have read a few of upur stories they are very good a good author can make you feel like you are there either ad a voyer or the person you are getting very goodcat that keep doing it peace

Loved it

OH MY GOD!!!! I love love love this so much! Please, if the story gods permit, follow up and tell us about their life together! I only cried a little, but Sophie's happiness will stay with me for a long time.

I love the positivity of your stories. Moments of regret or confusion are alway brief and resolved wonderfully. You are a fantastic writer. Thank you.

Thank you so very much for another wonderful story!!!

Wow very well written. Great story and nice ending.

This story made my night! Thank you

Gorgeous x