All Comments on 'Awakenings'

by DevilsAngel369

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Encore

very hot. I would love to see more of these ladies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
wonderful

that's all; just -- wonderful

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
hot just like my sister fozia

hotttttttttt i m totely wet now and wish my sister and mother will do that with me

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice

Really enjoyed this i am so wet now!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
EXCELLENT

ONE OF THE BEST I EVER READ--EXCELLENT

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
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Read until it said they got drunk and had a pillow fight. We don't need anymore male fantasies, okay?

raviraj1977raviraj1977over 14 years ago
excellent

an excellent story with great details, life moments and romance..!! i loved it..!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
some wrong infos

Frst of all what u mentioned as hena is actually called mehendi and homosexuality is not a taboo in hindus

Actually according to the Mahabharata a king named vagirath was born when lord shiva blessed his mothers to have a child through lesbian sex

plumberdonplumberdonover 6 years ago
Indian virgins

What beautiful story you have written. You brought it along nicely to a great conclusion. I loved your emotions and feelings you put into this piece. I can'twait to read more of your stories. Well done 'Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Just needed some judicious editing

I loved the story but please get an editor. It suffered from grammatical errors that distracted from the story. This deserves a sequel.or two.

AnjalilesAnjaliles5 months ago

Oh god...so beautiful...loved it...

Actually wiped tears off my cheeks a few times while reading

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