All Comments on 'Awakenings Pt. 01'

Very hot, slow and sensual build up, can't wait for next instalment

Looking forward pt 02!!!

Can't wait for the next part

Cant wait for Part 2, 3......

Love the calm casual way 2 intelligent, sexy sisters go about seducing their son/nephew. No angst, just honest lustful sexuality in the family. All families should be so blessed. This is a very hot story, well written too.

You are a very lucky man to have two older sexy ladies to teacher you the right way to be a awesome lover. Maybe could be a three some in the months ahead. Can wait to read more of the story

It would be cool if his friends got what he is getting. I also feel that he could shave his mom and aunt's pubes for them

5 stars

5 stars.Waiting for next chapter.Thanks

what erotic writings about

This is one of those stories you want there to be something more than 5 stars to give. Like maybe a mushroom cloud...lol. Excellent so far, can't wait for the next installment.

Excellent , great story. Keep it going !!

Cant wait for part 2.

The slow progression is great. Well crafted, erotic and kept me hard. Can't wait to read more of this story.

This is AN AMAZING STORY... THANK YOU!!!

this story is sooo good. I will wait very impatiently for the follow up.

I can only use my own sick imagination to think where the next chapter and more afterwards will take us.

Thank you

Looking forward to more

More, please!!!

Building lovely into a great story. More please!!

don't spoil the next chapter by letting his friends join in and fuck his mum or aunt. I hope he ends up living with them both permanently, can't wait to see which way you actually go with this story. well done so far.. five stars

Just keep it between you, you're mom, and aunt. It's that simple

You MUST continue this story!!!!!

Looking forward to the next part....

I love it. Your pacing is exquisite. And I await the next episode with panting breath.

Loved it. You write so well and with such exceptional creativity. The mounting excitement kept me on the edge of my seat and was too much to bear at times. There were so many telling details that added to the intensity; I particularly enjoyed the bit about the "mom" having worn the soiled bikini bottoms throughout the day and then putting them on again after he had freshly ejaculated. Such an expected and erotic occurrence. I can't wait to see how things develop. Please provide a sequel at the earliest opportunity - your readers demand it!

Not incest.

Brilliant start and the next one can only get better!

Other Anon., the heading is Incest/Taboo!

Really great story. Wish to read more soon

Looking forward to the next part(s)!!

looking forward to part 2

Can't wait for next sequel.

That's was great!!

Looking forward to reading part 2

I really enjoyed your story. I'm usually not a fan of stories written in the first person, but you write very well. I'm in agreement with many other commenters. I too can't wait to read the next installment. Thanks for a great read.

Eager to see what he is asked to not talk about next

I really like this story.

It had me laughing and enjoying it very much, I like the way you write!! Can't wait to read the rest!!!

This is one of my favorite stories yet, please keep making them

Loved the build up of this story, it had me on the edge all the time.

The narrative flows smoothly, the conversations are natural, and the sex is just right, small increments leaving me wanting more.

Why almost perfect? Because I am impatient and I want more more more, and you left me dangling on the brink. It's not your fault that you are such a smooth writer, but I feel I'm entitled to have a mini sulk :)

Ally

(literally2, having captcha issues)

is that the aroma of sex from both mother and son would definitely be noticeable when she was around anyone else, especially since she wiped her back and butt with the bikini bottom and the put it on. It would require a complete shower an change of clothing, including the bikini bottom, to make her clean enough to perform ANY medical procedure.

Great story, AND storytelling!! I'm out of pre-cum reading this, and my boner needs some relief. LOL

Great story. Love the slow buildup over 3 parts. Eagerly awaiting for your next story.

Sorry, but it was just a long 'cock tease' story. 2*

(8/20/2022) Great first chapter. Great setup. I enjoyed all of it. Looking forward to the next chapter. I read the comment below and all I can say is that some people don’t have the patience to enjoy a hot setup. I guess he’s a wham bam thank ya, ma’am, roll over and snore type of guy. Five stars and it goes on my favorites list.

Well, the story is good enough to get this old man leaking pretty good. Did think that the buildup was going along okay but at one point it was like a switch had been thrown. No more timid Will, how he has naked Mom and Aunt letting him finger fuck them. That's not bad, just a big jump.

When Will jacked off into his mother's bikini bottom, I thought that was the dumbest thing ever. I've used my mother's panties to masturbate with many many times and never got cum in or on them. It's a sure way to get busted. Then again, I never got to fuck my mom, so maybe I'm the one that did it wrong, lol.

Wow