All Comments on 'Awakenings Pt. 03'

Hope to read more

Great story. Great sex.

Thanks

I don't know if this is the end, I hope not.

If it is the end, all three parts have slowly built to a great conclusion

Thank you

good story. weak finish.

It would have been great if the friends had taken on the two ladies and had a fun experience with them

Please continue this series it's really hot and please don't add another male character into the sex part because having only one male is perfect

Just the right amount of angst coupled with lust. Love it.!

Please do more chapters and if so then please put anal sex in. Please

So hot.

Loved the pace in which these were written. Very believable. The mom especially had a very convincing storyline. Awesome awesome job.

first let me say i loved this story. i loved the build up and everything. i just wish the sex scenes were longer so i had more time to.... you know what 💦

I loved the honesty and respect the characters had for each other. Happy sex is hot as hell.

Just love your stories. So realistic. Are they just fantasy, or is there more?

I loved the culmination of the two sisters getting it on while Will fucked them. Please don’t let this be the end of the story. There’s so much more to explore for Will. What happens with Daphne does she join the sex triangle? Does mom starting date but still fucking her son? Is ther the possibility of Jen and Will falling in love? After al there’s no blood line so it could legally happen. I don’t know if I’ve cummed more to any story on lit, please keep this going...

Throwing the black guy in was a turn off. #justsaying

It started going a bit back and forth towards the end, but great read all in all. A 4th part would've been nice to better establish what will happen with the characters. I was hoping Will and Jen would fall in love, or maybe all 3 of them. Daphne was barely relevant in the one instance she was shown, so maybe that could've been fleshed out as well; romantically involved with his mother and aunt, but also married to Daphne perhaps? The impact of their relationship wasn't really shown either, but maybe it was negated by the lack of blood; something that could easily be fixed without changing that fact (or maybe a plot twist, a few come to mind.)

I also expected him to fuck Jen first, so that was an odd choice given the context and build up in my opinion.

#justsayingnothing would be good.

"Keeping a tight lid on your issues" even better.

Well done, maybe a little more regular sex & anal sex and less BJ's. Liked this story add some more chapters please.

Great story! Wish there was more! No need for more people though. Just how they juggled the 3.

Great start and ending as well. Very nice

Agreed. Awesome build up with the mom. Loved every bit of this.

Don't need more people, bit would love to see more of these three carrying on. Maybe one of them tried to date and the other two get jealous or something, driving them into a deeper relationship.

Great job with this.

With the other comments, If you do continue on with this brilliant story, just the three of them only. He can alway change their minds (with the just sex and no romance) bullshit and they stay together forever..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

doctor will get him a supply of "blue" pills to enable him to "go" around the clock?

Excellent story, well presented, the sex didn't overwhelm the story.

Thank you. I enjoyed all three series. 0hu

Loved it! Super fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

What about Daphne? She want a share of the action...

Loved everything about this story.

Amazing!

(8/20/2022) Brilliant! Bravo! Nicely done. I thought I had already read all the best stories on this site. Guess I was wrong. Five stars again and on my list.

Very erotic. Well done with very little foul language. This story move along well with little repetition and ended on just the right high note with all of them having sex together. Anything more would be anticlimactic and ruined it.

The last part of this story seemed to be kind of rushed in that there were a lot of typos and errors made. Like the author was just glad to get it done and posted. Not sure why it was such a big deal with keeping the secret between the sisters. Seemed like that should have happened last chapter and this chapter devoted to the three of them being nude and having sex together.

Fun, sexy and pretty well written. Five stars!

I enjoyed the story, though the last chapter just fell flat. Endings are difficult, but it was so rushed and unsatisfying to close what had been a slow burn of a story. It didn't ruined it, but it did seem a lot of nothing to have the sisters so worried about what the other might think only to get to the end and (1) they kiss as lovers and (2) only a microsecond of tension in the air.

Very erotic story and very well told!

This story brought back the fantasies I had my entire life of fucking my very own mother and her sister Kay! I always jerked off thinking of them both fucking me someday! It never happened! But I am 60 now and they are both passed on. And I still fantasize about them both. I have super intense orgasms thinking about them still! Your story made me cum so many times !

Oh no! This story is definitely unfinished. I want a foursome with Daphne and the sisters

Could have done with some ass fingering and fucking or a get together with grandparents.