All Comments on 'Away from the Office'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good- proof read.

The story was good but I would recommend proof reading prio to posting. It's 'through', not 'trough'; and how he throws the condoms to the side after having sex is kind of nasty, rather than just getting up and throwing them in the trash.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hoping for a follow up great story

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