All Comments on 'Ayakashi: Pt. 01'

I found you again. I'm the guy who tries not to argue with the author. Nice setup. Looking forward to the next installment. I know this is a rather short response from me but still it's only the first chapter ;)

That...ouch...that sortalike hurt...oh man...must...find cure for...flashes in...brain. So when's the next chapter? Just gotta know, cause I'll be sorely tempted to read it and must stock up on any available pills. Ouch. Gimme more...

Lol I thought you were female...

I'm actually a washing machine.

Warriors and their love stories are always a winning combination. Nicely set up premise and attention to backdrops have immersed me in to a surreal story. Words help us travel in time, to a place and even arouse us. Good job. Waiting for part 2.

I enjoyed this first part very much, despite all the blood and gore. You are as entertaining as an author as you are in chat.

Loved the story! Very immersive. You're very good at setting a scene. I can't wait to read the rest!