All Comments on 'Babe in Toyland'

Incest story and you start it by her facking a guy she met the first time. Yeah, fuck off.

Didn't like it

Mom’s a ho!

Part 2, please

I didn't like it.

It was a great story (to me) until the ending. Can't say that I cared for the way it ended, but up until ten, Great story.

judging from the first six comments, readers get super touchy if the story line deviates from mom and son get together and it lasts forever. having said that, she DID come off as far too easy with her boss, but it did keep the story moving along. This story is grounded in reality in that she has to chose, cuz boss man wants them to be exclusive. It's the sane choice for her to make. And her son will always have the memory of giving her mom quite a few orgasms, orally and fucking, plus some to die for blowjobs. He will always be able to savor the flavor of his Mom. This certainly qualifies as a love story, my favorite kind of mother/ son tale. many many of these are conquests or trickery, subterfuge. This one was straight and satisfying. I only wish my mother and i had made memories like these. In hindsight, i think she was putting it out there; foolishly, i never took the bait.Thanks for writing!

Great prose. It was straight forward with more than just a wink to what an actual situation might feel like. Disregard the comments by the naysayers. So, at risk of plagiarizing 'walkindatdog" I totally agree with his/her comments. As an aside, I really liked Jim's solid character.