All Comments on 'Baby Dyke'

i loved the build up to the story. I hate it that some stories dont bother with it, but you did a great job. But i would have liked more on the intimate moment.

I truly enjoyed your building ' 3D ' characters in Kat & Coach, Kat's panty fetish was hot, as was the building up to the sex. Story really clicked for me, youre an excellent writer. Looking for Kat to be 'lovingly' dominated , another time hopefully.

Thanks Again That was Nice !

not bad, I appreciated that there was enough characterization but not so much that it got to long. The biggest problem was that there was not quite enough sex at the end. a bit more would have been nice. Also its Tegan and Sara no h, although I loved the reference =)

I liked the build up a lot but the ending was a disappointment. Other than that it was a good story.

It was great, but I would have liked it better

If the ending was better, if there was more sex

Then fore play.

WOW what a story I would love to be the coach or baby dyke I love to suck pussy or cock.

This story was fantastic but it need more sex.

Made me cum so hard 😍

I am in ah of how beautifully you composed this inspiration. Although there were some grammatical errors. I still was very well entertained.

Now that was truly exceptional. I can't think of anything more to demonstrate how moved I am. 5💥's

I thought it lacked suspense and really could be longer but it stil got 5 stars and I hope we deserve more chapters

there should be another page to this story it seems to be left open ended.

from: Marcus Horton an avid reader of literoctica as well as your works.

You talk about HOPS.. I remember when I was young at 18 years old as I went to college.. friends and I usually went there for food.. now HOPS is still there? Thanks for mentioning

a bit pedophilic telling her that she had always been attracted to her like...?

Great story, poor ending. Could of been extended at least two more chapters. Dialogue was lacking as well. Still, scenes well written, details greatly described and emersion into the story was there. 4 out of 5.

The ending came to quickly. Should have made more storyline to develop the relationship further.

I hope there is going to be a follow up to this chapter were if carriers on from this lovely sex seen.

Only wish that u were here now, I so much would LOVE to suck your hard nipples and lick and swallow your pussy juice as I eat you out. Love jj