All Comments on 'Baby Girl's Bound Adventure'

I roll my eyes as yet another author attempts to write their story in First-Person, Present-Tense, and fails. I think to myself, "It's hard to write a decent story, period, but it's even harder to write one in FP, PT. So why do they continue to try?" Then I get up to go take a piss, and try to forget about the badly written story tobiasbrahms attempted to write.

Favourite one on here so far I gave you 5 stars

And as for pt whatever your not writing a novel or an English thesis so don't be too hard on yourself 👍