All Comments on 'Baby Sister Has Stomachache Ch. 02'

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BoxcarbillBoxcarbillalmost 3 years ago

I thought it should have been under Fetish headings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Get an editor or proofread your work! "...but when she sat on me in a swimsuit, with her dick visibly hard in her crotch...like now, then it became embarrassing. " Your sister has a dick?!?!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

get an editor. very unprofessional. dont publish unedited things please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story, just needs a lot of proofreading

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

i did not like the development with mum

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

WOW! Great Story..... LOTS of Pee, Poop and Constipation too! Maybe, next time, have a Bit More Straining, and Grunting, 100% GREAT Though....... Brilliant!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

This was painful to read, the grammar and sentences were just awful. My dick not only got soft, it crawled up inside me.

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A Swedish man 54 years living in Stockholm in a smaller apartment. I like being cosy in the sofa while talking, laughing and having a nice time, maybe with a glass of wine, as much as (or more) then all the kinky fetish stuff. Curious about a lot of things... ...and think tha...

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