All Comments on 'Babydoll Ch. 12'

I don't really understand the point of this chapter!? All that happened is that we confirmed he likes his girlfriend but loves his sister more. His mom is a selfish manipulative bitch but because he can't so no to pussy he's ok with that. Even though she screwed him into losing the love of his life! To be honest all we've found out is that this dude is too big of an idiot to deserve any of these women! He really is a douchebag!!!

Wow to that first scene and the scenarios. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Seems like it's leading to something. Jimmy and Ashley having second thoughts?

This story was started in 2003, I hope you intend to update it more frequently so you don't loose readers.

where the brother going to have two or more girl and the sister have to share him or worse she going to become a lesbian

I liked this chapter as a continuation and obviously how it opens up possibilities for the future.

I like how this chapter is layed out. I actually like how the whole story is layed out. If you're not a professional writer then you're mature person. So far the story is very maturely layed out. I have one concern. I know this is an older work but I hope I don't get let down again lol. Please don't let Jimmy hurt Jill. I'm on the side of Ash but I'm afraid she's going to be like their mother in the next chapter and I don't want that

Improvement on the storyline