All Comments on 'Babydoll Ch. 25'

I have read this story from the beginning. Re-read some 2 or 3 times over. You are a fine writer! You have a rare talent: the ability to create dazzling characters, sedutiveness, and a sexual taboo like no other. I am going to be honest and say I was so disappointed in the ending. However the disappointment was my of my own making. I placed my complete love of the story with Jim's raw sexual all consuming love for Ashley. And in the end I could not wrap my head around losing that ending. Still a story very well written!