All Comments on 'Baby's New Crib Pt. 01'

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.

Whoops! Sounds like a part 2 is going to cum. 😈

"Oh mom, it's so could.

Has potential. You need someone to proof read your work. It will make it so much better. Mistakes distract the reader.

Please take the time to get proofed, this was essentially unreadable.

but you might want to re-do second grade.

Great start, hot as hell.

This is a real good start to a series. Cant wait to read the next chapters.

Very poor writing. Not sure if you typed this with your left hand - your right obviously being busy. This story had great potential. It just seemed so rushed and lacked realistic detail. Don't stop writing but take your time and 'build' the story.

Good start to a series, please continue but do take the time to proof read or find an editor to handle the typing / grammar errors