All Comments on 'BabySitter and the Gay Couple'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
PLEASE MORE

Please write more! I am in desparate need of a second chapter! This is the hottest story I've read in the longest time. Please, Please, Please write more soon!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Well, I think the previous commentator went a bit overboard, but it was still okay.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More!

So hot! Had me squirming on my bed, thinking maybe I should take up babysitting.

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2over 9 years ago
Highly erotic -nothing Short OR SWEET

Nothing Short OR SWEET about it - soo much packed into this well crafted artistic achievement. I honestly was looking forward to 'learning' how two gay guys were going to appease this horny babe. But you didn't disappoint this reader one bit. Totally amazing how stimulating so few words can be.

I WANT TO BE YOU! Being the baby sitter is one thing, but having your talent to write like this is a tops on my Bucket List. Oh what a blessing on this Thanksgiving Holiday.

readymademilfreadymademilfover 8 years ago
Hot

She better go back!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Names

At the end of the baby sitting when Peter gets back you call him Andrew at points and it makes it a bit confusing please check and edit the names back

Super hot story I was rubbbing myself so much

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