by Ashson
Okay, I know you don't do sequels, but this story could really benefit from one, not that it isn't a five star story already (it is!). I would just love to hear her discussion with Belinda, and then enjoy hearing about what Belinda proposed to continue the fun. Maybe Belinda would share Andy? Or maybe Andy has a friend? One thing, though: Does anyone in Australia ever even consider the idea of birth control? What will she tell her younger sister about sitting for Curt and Alexia?
I find your stories quite fun to read, if not always very erotic. I especially like it when you have your characters engaged in clever banter. This time you did not edit the story to the level of your best. At one point Belinda became Bethany and the word "help" was used in place of "held". Although these sorts of thing are minor distractions, they are, nonetheless, distractions. I very much look forward to more of your stories and will admit to being a bit disappointed when I have to wait more than a few days to experience a new one, but I am delighted by the fact that you are so prolific.
Title kinda says it all. Really liked the first half with the whole secret viewing party. The latter half where our heroine was taken involuntarily seemed maybe a tad rushed and maybe lacking a bit in authenticity? I think even in a heightened state of arousal and shock I would still resist to some degree about getting impaled. All in all, I quite enjoyed the story. Thank you for sharing it! <3
Well done. The only thing missing is a line or two about the risk of being unprotected...
I really like the way you write N/C.
The action was hot but wrapped up a bit too quickly. I was hoping the wife would get more involved too.
5*s
Was Belinda's middle name Bethany?!?!? :)
good read.. very hot...
hush money and a new dress from her dad - a bit more than she expected - lol