All Comments on 'Babysitters from Oz'

You need an editor. The story was good enough, but very hard to read with the grammar and spelling issues. You are writing a story, not sending a text message!

I'm surprised that any American Company would hire someone who has such a feeble grasp of the English language as a "Senior Manager".

It's bad enough reading the American (phonetic) version of English, let alone when it is grammatically poor.

Quite a good plot; destroyed by the construction. Next time, use an Editor from Australia or the UK (ie: one who can spell & use grammar correctly)