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All Comments on 'Babysteps and Her Minis'

by tkoberon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wrong term

Read a medical book on anatomy to get the standard proper term for various body parts. Its not 'aureole' though similar not correct by the medical books.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

And actually take an english class, your writing sucks.......

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
iLike!!

It had a few grammatical errors. Still a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic and idiot critics!!

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