by Joey Midnight
Fantastic story. Unfortunately abandoned. Author ghosted for 5 years then showed up with a different story.. Andh now has been MIA for 11. If we don't count a modification to his profile 6 years ago. Hopefully all is well.
Chapter 2!
Think how bad it would be if someone else had to write it. On the other hand, if you tell me where you want it to go, tell me, i’ll Write it up and you can edit it. Or take it over and assume credit.
Anytime you see bachelor or bachelorette in a story, you know it sucks.
Noooooooo!!!!!!! Damn it, where is Ch2? It's been over 10, isn't that enough for another chapter or three?
Just messin with ya. A new installment would be awesome, but it's still a hell of a good start, a super easy 5* read. Thanks for writing this, loved it.
Either finish what you start,or don't bother at all!
A tease with no ending! FUCK this shit! ~ 1 (Would be a BIG FAT ZERO,if that was an option!)
I want him to get what he wants. I love a man who gets satisfied with another woman, especially if it simultaneously turns on/humiliates his wife/girlfriend. Please keep writing!
Everything is boring after ingesting gallons of semen
Really a good read and exciting enough to be real and fantasy fodder too heh
Please don't leave everyone hanging
Steve
Bursting, waiting for the??
Loved the story.
Please before I turn blue and they pop finish the story.
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Just wait for all the men haters to slam it.
They will point out that only cuckold stories belong here.
Excellent, a real tease and a disapointment that part 2 isn't there (yet??)
Great story but wishing/hoping it stays as just the threesome!
Dying to read the next part of this one, have to say that this is one of the hottest I've read on Literotica to date, and wanting to know exactly where it'll go next with the "second show". Its been a while since part one was posted so... please! Can we have the rest soon? XD
Wow! I've never been moved to post before but that was really hot!!! Thanks for sharing it.
This is quite a ;ap dance the lad is getting.
I'm guessing there is going to be two women in a 69 pretty soon.