All Comments on 'Back Home'

This was a great erotic story. One of the most difficult things about writing erotic stories is balancing sex and plot. Most writers either give too much story without enough sex or so much sex it just comes accross as sleazy. You have found a great balance and I believe that to be your greatest strength. Thank you for the story and I look forward to your future submissions

What happened to Uncle Louie? Where did George and Uncle Frank come from? Why was his Aunt so angry with Frank? Why was he staying with Frank? Not a very well thought out story.