All Comments on 'Back Pain Ch. 02'

by matanda

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johngus22johngus22about 3 years ago

Love the "daddy/sir" characters you create! They are exactly what I desire in an older man. Love how they are strong, confident, demanding but without overdoing it. There's a gentleness and care attached to their command. Great stuff!

CuriousPeteCuriousPeteabout 3 years ago

Hot

And worth another chapter or two. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Hot

Great story and the sex is so good. I love the interactions- desire and need. Cool role playing.

bhart1bhart1about 3 years ago

A generally nice read so far. It has yet to reach the level of a 5 for me so I won't rate until/unless it does. I don't want rob you of the satisfaction of the high rating it has earned you to date.

lexavianlexavianalmost 3 years ago

Johngus really nailed everything I loved about it. I've never felt so represented by the main characters desire. Every minute he was craving something, I was too. Hell even his distaste for scrubs was similar. Anyways this was a fine read both in content and in style. Next time I look for.something to read, it's going to be the rest of your works.

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