by matanda
Love the "daddy/sir" characters you create! They are exactly what I desire in an older man. Love how they are strong, confident, demanding but without overdoing it. There's a gentleness and care attached to their command. Great stuff!
Great story and the sex is so good. I love the interactions- desire and need. Cool role playing.
A generally nice read so far. It has yet to reach the level of a 5 for me so I won't rate until/unless it does. I don't want rob you of the satisfaction of the high rating it has earned you to date.
Johngus really nailed everything I loved about it. I've never felt so represented by the main characters desire. Every minute he was craving something, I was too. Hell even his distaste for scrubs was similar. Anyways this was a fine read both in content and in style. Next time I look for.something to read, it's going to be the rest of your works.