All Comments on 'Back Scratches Affair Ch. 03'

If you're as sick as your story you died long ago

even duting her confession seesions the wife lied. The affair lasted 6 month according to the other women .... so the wife is lying about that as well and at a time when she SHOULD be confessing. Never mind the part time job she hid from her "husband".........................

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at one point he asks <b>did you have anal sex with her....</b> The wife SHOULD of said yes. Instead the author has the wife respond with a long winded cringing insulting hate fill monolouge that goes for <b>16 PARAGRAPHS and 1093 words</b>... then the Husband ask 1 more sentance --6 words-- and she continues for 5 more paragrpahs and 600+ more words.

The zero vote was created!

Man, don't let these assholes bother you! They would rag on their own wife or mother is they had written this or anything else. Perpetual bitchers is all they are. They haven't had a good day since their mother made them quit eating shit from their diapers! There are a hell of a lot of people out here that read your story and like it. Most probably won't leave a comment. I like your writing, but I hate whining snakes.

I enjoyed the story, and I agree with the comments about people ragging on you. I often wonder how many of these experts have submitted their own stories. You write much better than I . . . again thanks!

Enjoyed the story for the most part, but couldn't quite wrap my head around the part where George describes Susan buggering him with the strap-on. Women do fuck their guys all the time, but I can't imagine a husband telling anyone, even a close friend about it, particularly in such detail. Guys just don't do that.

Jack had no reason to take Jennia back! Both Jennia and Susan believed that they would get caught but they did not care (they both felt they could pussy whip their husbands to take them back). They were only upset because they were caught not what they were doing._________________________

You describe Jennia as a self assured woman who knew what she wanted and set out to get it. She loses a part time job, gets depressed and start an affair? It was all about her. The fact that she did not lie about the length of the affair does not mean she was honest with Jack.__________

If Jack thinks that she did not mean what she said when she was caught with Susan he is a fool. Professional investigators know that it is when suspects are off guard and shocked is when you hear the truth from them. Jack also never asked Jennia why she did not teach him how to make love to her him like Susan._____________________

SleeplessinMD

I agree with the ones about the people ragging on you, but I also agree with what ( SleeplessinMD ) says also....If you want to score a 100 from me, then your epiloque better be FANTASTIC and answer should those concerns.. I so far have liked the story, although there are enough different ways you could continue to take this story....

Paul

Once a cheater, always a cheater and how will you react next time. Were you swayed by her giving you money, did she buy you off? If that is the case, you are no better than she is. I was wondering, were can you go and buy a new truck for just over $3,000?

This was the ending to a story and it should end here and now. Jack should and let his so called loving wife fuck him in the ass and vise versa. This story does not need an epilogue.

<p>..........This one not so much so</p>

<p>I grant you warned "kinky" sex, but I guess "bi-sexual" males and females norally doesn't enter in my thoughts as kinky, and more into the Gay catergory. I'm not bashing folks who are, I know quite a few folk who are in my life, and one guy who I've know for years is (I've known him since 1st grade), but I was kinda shocked about the other husband getting into and enjoying letting his wife do him with a strap on because she enjoyed doing it to someone. I guess both of them are in the closet and full of denial. But regardless, while I know some folks who are, Gay stories aren't really my cup of tea. Lets just call it my preference to not read them and leave it at that with no hidden meanings thrown into it on my part, or by anyone else. But regardless of that, who tells a guy they just met (because their wives are cheating with each other and that's thier only only link to each other) that your now into kinky gay sex with your wife because it maker her happy and you've come to enjoy it now too? Anyone? To a guy you basiclly only know for a few months but definately less than half a year???</p>

<p>But that was the tip of the iceberg for this story. Them getting back together doesn't make any sense. Well not in what I read. Like Harry and a few others mentioned, the wife lied left and right, she (and the other 2 involved in the story) takes great pains and pleasure in describing not just what they did, but how they did it, why they did it, and how much they enjoyed what they did. And to make matters worse none of them from the wife on down seemed to be bothered how the husband, who seemed to be the focal point, has to sit through them all telling him all of what they did, how it felt, and how much fun it was. The wife pull no punches, softened no blows, and at times seemed to enjoy getting into telling how it felt.</p>

<p>The story for me broke down into a wife who claimed remorse, but never displayed it. The other woman, who has quite a few problems of her own, pleads for the wife. And even the other husband of the other woman pleads for the wife. But nothing made me think it was to be. Most of what I read made me feel the husband was desperate to cling to anyone so he wouldn't have to be alone. That and the story seemed to be basiclly written for stroke. It had a lot of girl on girl action with nothing really written for me to put the wife and husband back together other than because it was written so. Nothing written seemed to say "they deserve to be together and here's why" and more "because I said they got back together because they didn't want to be alone, ok?"</P>

<p>I'll look for your next writting, because your good, but this just wasn't one of your good stories for me</p>

-Risq

Not to discourage you writer but this didn't ring right. Six months of cucking him - preferring and loving her - fucking her instead of her husband because she also loved her (your words).

You chose a lesbian cucking for what reason? Because it was different and that's ok. But cucking and loving someone else for an extended period of time with no end in sight or intended is just the ultimate disrespect without regard for the spouse regardless of what gender the lover is.

In fact, one could make the case that it is worse as my friend said who found himself in a similar life and mind bending situation. He said "how can I make her feel like her lessie did. I don't have the tools". Being second or worse to a lesbian lover could not be overcome in his mind as he said "I don't have softness, tits and a cunt, nor can I get it up all night like her lover could". And I can see his point. Once the lesbian or gay path is preferred an opposite gender spouse doesn't have the tools or desire to compete or recover what was theirs. They are also strongly upset that they were not enough nor ever could be the other gender.

So writer while your gender twist in long term cuckers was interesting, the concluding non-reality doesn't wash in the semi-normal male mind as I think you can see in the comments. It was well written and to a point had some lifelike reality but ----

Jack might as well start bending over now, it's only a matter of time till Jennia is doing him in the ass. She's a self-centered bitch who has been lying to him and deceiving him for the better part of a year. She denied him sex while having marathon sessions with her lover. She has shown absolutely no respect for him and no concern for his feelings. I want to thank you for sharing your talent with those of us who have none, but I find nobody in this tale to care about even a little. The women are man-haters and the men show so little spine it's amazing they can walk around upright.

The conversations between George and Jack did not really seem possible to me. No man I have ever known could have such a conversation. Perhaps that makes me bizarre, and not George, but.....

Who scratched the husband’s back? The answer: No one, literally and metaphorically. He was essentially a passive receptacle (pun intended of course) to the degree of a reporter (to us) of all the fun (guilty not guilty or pretend guilty alike) that every one but him had all the time. But he gets to hear all about the kinky stuff, and so do we, isn’t it fun? <P>

I gathered on my own (not that I needed the ‘warning’ – as if the first chapter was PG) that a great deal, maybe most, of the story was supposed to be a stroke story. In chapter two though, it turned into even more detailed, mostly gay sex, and then some of what the author called kinky sex (I’d call it ‘gay in disguise’ sex). So I am not sure if it was fun for the poor husband to listen, but it was disappointing for me and not fun. I skimmed the long descriptions of Gay sex not only because I am not getting any thing out of it but also because none of it was moving the plot anywhere. There was simply not enough plot in the plot per stroke ratio. <P>

Sure they can try coming together. Sure counseling sounds good. Yet, so many emotional issues were not explored because of the ‘stroke’ priority. As it turns out, the plot was just an excuse for the ‘kinky sex’. I think an opportunity for a better story was missed in the second chapter.

who feels that this story didn't live up to your best work, though I've enjoyed reading it. *************************** The issue for me is that Jennia puts Jack through hell, she betrays him in a pretty unforgivable, ongoing way for six months. The fact that it's with another woman doesn't make it any less of an affair, or a betrayal. ************************ And then, as others have observed, she tells him about the sex in enormous detail, not being kind at all to his feelings. There's very little in the story about Jennia acknowledging what she's done to her husband, making a commitment to him, earning his trust once again. It just seems as though, after a lot of listening to her go on and on about the sex with Susan, Jack decides to take her back. ************************* In general I love your stories, with all the feelings and emotions you stir up, but the resolution of this one didn't feel as satisfying to me. ****************** Thanks as always for your stories, though! A fan, ohio

but it looks like a bold cheater just gets everything in life he wants. if its in the job , which is common enough now also in private life. and nobody wants to stand up against it. it's all yours but not mine. a world without rules, that shows us real life, just brings us disaster

Just another wimp hubby story to send the wrong, wrong, terribly wrong message about real men. I'm sure the forgive & forget wimps faction rejoice.

You actualy have an "editor?"

From Katha Upanishad:

"Abiding in the midst of ignorance, thinking themselves wise and learned, fools go aimlessly hither and thither, like blind led by the blind."

TabooTeller has submitted some fine stories to this website. Unfortunately, this isn't one of them. Frankly, the punctuation and grammar weren't up to Taboo's standards and, regretfully, neither was the storyline. I’m just so disappointed.

a cheater, is a cheater, is always a cheater. Do you really have time to watch her 24/7/365 for your life span?

I am new to the site and your stories and enjoy both.

This tale shows originality and caring. What is so

bad about forgiveness and reunion? If the readers

are so down on such tales they have the choice to

quit reading them. Please keep writing them. Thanks.

I enjoyed your story, but I have to agree with Ohio, there did not really seem to be much remorse on her part, especially with her giving him all of the gory details. Also, I thought you should have followed through more on the issue of her living with her lover. Even if what she and Susan said was true, there was no basis on which to trust her after her cheating and lying to him. Spending the first night with Susan at a hotel and then setting up house with Susan were the worse things she could do if only from a perception standpoint. Thanks for sharing the story but where is the epilogue?

First of all the story in general spent way too much time on the sex between the women, and I am not sure what relevance the acts between George and Susan had to any of it. Take away the wife's telling her husband every gory detail of her time with Susan and there is not much left and certainly not anything to rebuild the relationship. It seemed as if the wife you created wanted to rub his face in her acts and was only contrite in the fact that she got caught. I tend to lean toward the side of reconcilation in most cases....this one does not work at all. Certainly not one of your best, not even close.

It suc*d. No credibility, wimps as men, sluts as wifes, lust instead of love... And a story line that is so worn out that... Awh, let's just say that it's more toilet than paper. Cheers Yoron. You seem to be able to write? Why so boring ideas??

the ladies do that for 6 months, and then get caught.

they were going to stop ? no, jack was cut off w/o much

of a thought.

jack seemed smarter than to step back into the same mess. ok, maybe he wasn't. silly .

SICK

I noticed on one of the chapters you changed the name of the restaurant from Writing to Scribing whats it going to be next time?

She needs to be dominated sexually and in every day life. He could set rules for her to live by, and make sure she acts slutty toward him, as she is his personal little cum slut. When she is with other people she should act like a Sunday school teacher. At least that is how I see it. Thanks for the good chapter....Rich

Susan reason was that george treated her like a child,isn't that what a child does when it does't get it own way hurt the person there with.They both are sluts no two ways about it and in real life would have been chased with no forgiveness.

Left out the dude sharing his wife doing his ass with a strap on. Other than that two broads is always hot.

Lack of communication and failure to honor the implied promises in a marriage commitment. Marital partners have an obligation to understand the needs of their partner, and ask them for their feedback in the relationship. One problem with marriage is that it promotes the feeling of 'routine', which is a killer of emotional commitment and intimacy. that seems to be a lesson in this story. Comments which simply recommend BTB are not very helpful and reveal a lack of understanding of what a marriage can reward partners with in terms of life satisfaction. 4 Stars. Dan

Well, people just don't talk to each other like this.

What you've done is take a first person description of what happened and just wrapped quotes around it. People don't talk like that in real life. No one uses the word 'undulating' in a description of anything when talking about it.

And guys most assuredly do not tell each other about being fucked in the ass by their wives. At all.

As a story, it's not bad. As a piece of writing it doesn't quite work.

She's a bi-sexual now. Also they never really ended there affair. Can she be sexually satisfied now with only him. In the future is there going to be s 4-some between the four of them. I don't see a future for them because of Jennia still is open to a open marriage with other women involved. There is probably more cheating on her part which will end in divorce.

bunch of wimpy cucks on this one. not my thing.

Really, really confused about her 2.5 month second part-time job. (Why did she make such a big deal of precisely saying 2.5 mos?) "My boss didn't want me and you didn't want me." I guess the boss didn't like her work and fired her. Nothing sexual at all. Right?

cuck shit.

another cocksucking fag posting dumb cuck SHIT.

I just can't summon the enthusiasm to read anymore of this pathetic piece of cuck shit.

""I decided to tell her that I would let her still be in charge at times, she could even, um, fuck me."

Jack raised his eyebrows at that, and said, "You mean?"

"Yes, I mean with the strap-on." - Cuck credentials confirmed.

Then we're "Treated" to another detailed and overlong description of vile, sorded sodomy on the other husband by his sick Dom, slut wife.

I'm done with this dispicible piece of writing excrement.

1*

This is far belated, and likely never to be read by the author, but I can't believe anyone ever would have a conversation with their cheated on spouse explaining:

Then she touched me here, and she said "Ooh" and then she pulled me to bed, and we did something, and moved to the whatever and that other thing, and she put her dildo in me, and then I went and got the lube, etc etc"

Nor that a mostly stranger guy would come over to talk about reconciling with his wife and how she liked to peg him and how he came without being touched and sharing the details and dialogue.

Just not realistic, to have these described sex scenes as if they are parts of any conversation real people would have.

Show, don't tell. If you want to have those scenes, have those scenes. Don't make them strange dialogue, particularly since that dialogue would only drive people further apart.

Not sure I can read more of this. Hopefully, only one more chapter to go.

It never ceases to amaze me how some stories depict cheaters describing their sexual acts in minute detail to their devastated partners. I could understand it if the couples were in an all out cuckold relationship and the partner got off on the gory details, because retelling the exploits would be titillating for the cuckold.

Conversely, reciting the details to a partner that doesn't get off on it is just piling salt on the wounds of betrayal. The described sex certainly loses any erotic appeal at that point and no justification about "planning to cheat" excuses making someone suffer through every sweaty move. For me, the story then becomes a scrolling exercise as I scan for anything that moves the story forward.

This far in, I'll try to finish the damn story.

I had to agree with Tangjeweed for I also kept wondering if this story was going anywhere, so I actually skipped through a lot of paragraghs to see if the story was going to move. if the lover could make the wife come better than him and also make her feel better, I don´t see what he´s fighting for? What hope is there after she told him that he couldn´t make her come, Is it always going to take someone else to make her happy in bed? Who knows, all I know is that the author is now going to have to turn the character into some kind of sex God to make up for everything that the lover gave her that he couldn´t. It actually just got kind of confusing.

I can't give you a 5-star rating with Jack being a wimp. Too many painful memories for me.

Please keep writing!

Sigh another cucky wimp story. Second story of yours I've read and both times you have written the husbands so wimpy and pathetic. Even in this one, the lover is a woman and she has more balls then the husband. Frustrating to read.

Try writing a story between sex

I never understand not telling the cheating partner things.

Why he didn't mention the scratches on her back when he first saw them is questionable but, with the shock of seeing them and thoughts she might be cheating, maybe understandable.

When she's telling all the details of her affair. When she mentions trying to hide the scratches... Why wouldn't he tell her that he saw them the second time and noticed the scars from the first time?

After he asks her if she enjoyed the anal ... And she even mentions that she asked him to stop fingering her ass because she didn't want him to feel the lube ... Why wouldn't he tell her that he suspected her of cheating, that's why he fingered her ass and that he did in fact notice the lube and that her asshole was loose.

It's just so strange to me that you're having conversations to maybe try to save your marriage and the offended party wouldn't tell her how much he knew and maybe shame her some more so that she'd never consider doing it again.

George's wife, made him her bitch, this story keeps getting worse. Must be female influenced. They love to write stories were, They can have their cake, and eat it too.