All Comments on 'Back to Back Pt. 01'

A great start to what is promising to be an interesting rekindled friendship! I loved the playfulness between Artie and Miles and look forward to the next chapter! Well done!

This is gonna be GOOD!

This was a great introduction to their story. I think all of us have somebody from our past whose loss we have grieved over, and whose reappearance in our life would make us feel "more whole" again. It's heartwarming to see at least one such pair of lost friends find each other again. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where they go next.

I love this! You're a great writer. Really excited to see how this story unfolds between Miles & Artie!

Fantastic first effort, TurbulenceAhead! You’ve done a great job creating two distinct voices for Miles and Artie. Five Stars and Following you so I don’t miss a single word!

I love this already. Based on your explanation at the end, I guess I've seen this theme (roommate / best friend) at the site lately. But, I like that your writing style doesn't remind me of other authors, because I'm usually annoyed when an author copy other others' writing style in an obvious way.

@armplasma Thank you! I'm glad you like it especially if you're familiar with the other works on this sight. I've been trying really hard to keep the story and writing style my own and I really appreciate that you've taken notice.

@dnsontn Thank you! Going into it I knew having them sounds like people with two different communication styles was important to me. I'm glad it shows. Part two should be up in a week or less

@jonkingbrothers It definitely is a universal experience and I think that's why I chose to make that the basis of this story. Everyone can relate at least a little bit

@Gybbs Its my first time writing anything besides an essay for school but I'll try my best!

@Sunnydaze361 Thank you! I really appreciate yours and everyone else's feedback! It's very encouraging.

@Anonymous I'm glad you liked it and I hope you keep commenting! Any and all feedback is welcome!

The college roommate situation is one of my very favorite things and I love the way you have made the characters and I also love slow burns. I'm more about the emotion and the feelings between the boys then I am about the sex. I am excited to read the next chapter and grateful that I found your story

This already looks promising. The plot is familiar but i really like your writing, hope to see more soon!

Excellent buildup of the two friends meeting again, their childhood history and the budding sexual attraction. Really looking forward to seeing where it goes...

@Michrick1 Thank you! I'm glad you found my story too and I hope you keep commenting what you think!

@patinoandres12345678 Never written before but trying my best to make it my own! Thank you for your comment and your praise! Next part up soon.

this is cute!, the characters have a real depth to them. Hope you keep writing!

@RobJasper I really appreciate the feedback! Please keep commenting your thoughts!

@qchickie Thank you! I have zero experience creating characters, so I'm hoping to keep improving!

Love your story!

@Dickbrokemyheart Thank you! And thank you for your comments!

Thank you for this sweet story, it seems so promising! I just found it and I can't wait to read the next chapters. It's true, it seems like a combination of a few stories I read so I'm happy to see many elements I loved all combined in one story :)