All Comments on 'Back to Back Pt. 02'

I forgot to ask in the previous chapter, but how did they bunked their beds just like that? What kind of bed is that?

Some pretty sweet heat for this slow burn! Dual erections and both boys thinking they’re the only one hard. Love it!

@armplasma thank you for your comments! On this part and the last, I really appreciate the interaction! Growing up I had a bunk bed in my room that could be bunked and unbunked. As well as in college we had the option to loft or bunk our beds. I think the furniture many colleges use for beds have this capability. If you mean who did it, at my university people from the maintenance crew for the building would come to the room and bunk or loft the bed for you. Hope that cleared up your question!

Looking forward to more. Great characters!

One of these guys has to have a spread of chest hair for his manly chest -- maybe the one whose ass is a bit hairy. Their cuddling together in bed for warmth could be a good beginning to love-making. Good writing!

Omg, I love the build up! I ran into a story earlier that was rated high, so I thought it would be good. Within the first few paragraphs the sexual action started, and I was done. If I wanted that immediate action, I’d just watch porn. I want a story. I want to visualize their relationship building or at least words connecting their existing relationship and giving me a trail to follow. So far your story has great flow and texture. Not too slow and not too fast. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

They're so freaking adorable! I know it's gonna get hot and steamy later on, but i really wouldn't mind if you kept the story wholesome as they're just so cute together.

The characters you introduced in the first chapter are continuing to emerge still more clearly, and I find myself wanting to meet and hug each of them. The love between them, their joy and relief at finding each other again and relaxing together in a world where their "other half" is there to complete them, is beautiful to see. You're a superb writer, and this series is enormously engaging. Fantastic character development.

@jonkingbrothers your words mean a lot to me! Thank you for your engagement on this part and the last. I'm trying hard to let the characters be and write themselves, I'm glad it feels organic!

@patinoandres12345678 You know, that's not a half bad idea, but I think some people might be upset if there's no real steam. I'm really glad they're connecting with you emotionally before it gets there though!

@Anonymous "Looking forward to more. Great characters!" Thank you! And I really appreciate any engagement even if its one sentence. Please keep commenting what you think!

@Anonymous "One of these guys has to have a spread of chest hair for his manly chest -- maybe the one whose ass is a bit hairy. Their cuddling together in bed for warmth could be a good beginning to love-making. Good writing!" Miles most definitely has got some fur on him. As the story goes on there will be more in depth descriptions of the main characters appearances. I know its a bit thin in that aspect at the moment, but I'm waiting for the right time. Thanks for your comment!

@Anonymous "Omg, I love the build up! I ran into a story earlier that was rated high, so I thought it would be good. Within the first few paragraphs the sexual action started, and I was done. If I wanted that immediate action, I’d just watch porn. I want a story. I want to visualize their relationship building or at least words connecting their existing relationship and giving me a trail to follow. So far your story has great flow and texture. Not too slow and not too fast. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!"

A good build up always makes for my favorite stories on here, so I totally understand where you're coming from. As far as the pacing goes, I've been letting the natural progression of a college semester and the rekindling of friendship take the boys along, and I'm glad it's resulting in something that flows well. I've been curious as to how the pace is being perceived and I really appreciate the feedback! Thank you!

@dnsontn I know, right? And I was planning on this chapter being totally PG too... But once I got writing it sort of just happened. What can I say? They're like magnets.

Loving these two guys, their arousals and their roughhousing plus sleeping together! Please hurry with more chapters!

@RobJasper Working dutifully! Trying to have a chapter up every 7-10 days

They are so cute! I loved the shower scene :)