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by DawnJ

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Realistic!

I love the pace of this story. These people are adults, and despite their now obvious desire for each other, they don't act like randy teenagers. They act their age! Nevertheless, I can't wait to see what sorts of fireworks get set off when Peter finally takes Karen! Maybe next chapter?

demure101demure101almost 11 years ago
I agree -

It would be nice to see what happens next - I do love this story from beginning to end :)

SanityCheckSanityCheckalmost 11 years ago
Good so far

And then ... and then ...? :-)

DawnJDawnJalmost 11 years agoAuthor
By the end of this week, or early next week...

...chapter 5 will be up, I promise! :)

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