All Comments on 'Back To Secret Agent School'

Not too bad. Interactive stories are not easy to write when done well. This one was done well, Thanks for sharing.

Very nicely done

More please! It turned me on so much and some are even my fantasies!

Super Fun

Clever, but simplistic.

Enjoyable.

kind of a buzzkilll having my first choice end with my partner raping her...

A little short, but I didnt mind that too much. To be honest what bothered me more was the switching between second and third person, because it kind of takes you out of the story. Otherwise I enjoyed it!

Not bad. Wish she had sex with the unknown agent. Maybe have jimbo spank them. Or make them masterbate

I get to choose the things that got me off. Nice.

I only did one playthrough, so I understand that there's a lot of action that I've missed. The descriptions were a bit simplistic and the story could use a bit more details, but still it was hot and that's the most important part ;)

Very Hott read.

Hugs,

Cyndy Cox

Good Story, loved how you managed to make her Look so naive sometimes. That's pretty hot.

Make her voice more empowered, make her horny, had foreplay and small details like fingers running up thighs. Make characters sexy, not greasy or with bad hygiene issues. And delete all pubic hair. Everybody should be shaved.

keep up the good work, we need more of this

You see, women usually derive pleasure more differently than men. We need more story and foreplay. You should have gotten a better setting for the female storyline and also she needs to be pleasured by men too. It would have been more enjoyable if the criminal turned out to be handsome and seductive. Or maybe Anna could have seduced him. Don't try to force the sex, let it come naturally as the story progresses. As the herione we need to feel empowered not disgusted.

Seriously, for girls not into being raped in the mouth, you need a warning.

It's pretty good

You should really write more interactive stories, this pne was great.

You could try to diversify the scenes a bit too.

Finally, if you want to write a truly fantastic interactive story, try making different endings according to the choices you make ;)

I always loved interactive stories and this was one of the best.

would prefer scenes with more than cock sucking.

There aren't many stories like this out there. I loved it.

Played the guy, can't remember how many times I unloaded into Agent Slut's mouth. Would have liked a gangbang in there somewhere. Thought Barelle was going to suck me off at one point, so maybe a bi-gangfuck. Great work!

I also played as a woman and found too many felattio scenes. I don't know but I shouldn't have to blow every guy to see if I get cunn afterwards. Glad there was a lady on lady scene but even then, it wasn't reciprocrated.

Gave it 4 stars for sheer effort to complete the long thing

I'm playing as a woman. I need more stimulation to my lady parts, please. This story was all about pleasing the man. Not into it.

Please. This was amazing.

When playing as the woman give her more power. Let her be in charge. Not once does a guy eat the girl out.

One major flaw i see is that while playing as a female I was expected to bow down to the men. While I don't think you should get rid of this I feel that a opposite is in order for a sequel.

Plays on several different fantasies with fantastic writing and tons of options! Fantastic!

It has many different fantasies in this story.. Doctors, professors, cops, being held hostage, thrill, lesbians, etc. You made something that everyone will like!

A great story with lots of twists and turns - more please

This was one of my best reads on this sight. I will hope to see more in the near future

This is quite possibly the best submission I have ever seen on this site. Just fantastic... will there be a sequel?

I think I only dropped 4 loads in that interactive iteration. I am going to have to try again and again and again. This type of story is simply awesome, I loved every second of it and was a huge 'choose your own adventure' reader as a kid. Keep it up- 5 stars!

One of THE best interactive stories I have ever read! Please make more! On a side note, would it be possible to have multiple different endings or something? Besides that, though, don't change a thing because it was so great!

What can I say? This is just a fantastic story, and I find something new in it in every read. A great story - can we have another like it please?!

Please do more stories like this! :D

This story was fairly simple, but a hell of a lot of fun. Well done!!!!

Great imagination...

A little too much dick sucking. Needs spanking and straight sex

I kinda found it hard to read but thats just toward the force of Jimbo and his sexual ambition, I would have liked it more if there were more lesbian options and less Jimbo interferance. But thats just me and I am a lesbian so that would explain why I found parts of it hard to read. other then that it was pretty good.

Great interactive story wish there were more like it!

There wasn't enough sex. I think if you had Jimbo come in captured and had the three of them dominated, like the girls made to be sex slaves and had Jimbo do something else, and prolonged the story, it would've been better.

Could you do another interactive story? With more domination of women thanks :)

Its a good story, just including some anal and other penetration would be nice

It's a good story with multiple rewarding paths. For me, however, there were too many BJ's and not enough 'penetration' sex

it was a great story and fun.plz tell me how can i write my own RPG erotica.....

Good story line but more detail on the fucking would be nice and a little fewer BJ's. Fun writing style and nice way to lead the reader through the story. Keep writing :)

Hi this is dan

Such a good story, please consider doing another interactive story

This story was really good fun, I enjoyed reading it and choosing some of the outcome

Fun story but maybe less BJ's in the next time and more detail on the fucking.

I'm looking forward to reading the next one.

Would like to see one of these written by a woman.

Loved it. Do another Interactive story. It was very good.

Keep it up!

Definitely needs way less blow jobs.

It was alright, needed less blow jobs and more actual sex, more lesbian action would be appreciated lol

Even though I'm not familiar with the series, I really enjoyed it! Reminds me a bit of a hentai game, this interactive-story-thing =) keep it up!

Pretty good but needs much more lesbian action!

needed less blow jobs :p

It obviously needs WAY more lesbian action. And it needed less blow jobs. Like, way less. Don't forget what I said, ya hear?

Best interactive story, ever! Awesome stuff! I would love to read another.

It needed a ton more lesbian sex in it but the scene when the two girls shared a sleeping bag was dead hot

This is a really great story... You should definately do another interactive story. I'm having so much fun changing my answers to do it again.

It was fun trying out all the answers.

hmmmmm.... There was to much sucking dick. one or to instances are great, but there needs to be more sex. Variety is a good thing.

This is one creative and hot interactive story that you created. I bet everyone loves this story of yours. It's really creative.

Good story corny names but all in all fun

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It was a little cheesy playing Anna Nichole Smith, however I wonder if maybe that might have been part of the fun of it.

That was really hot,

Would Have liked a longer sex scene between the girl and the gangster?

And maybe more lesbian action in the sleeping bag

Hot stuff, really got me going, my cunt is soaking wet right now.

I don't normally leave comments but wow that was the greatest. I kept going back to try other ending. Got me really really hot. Please write another. It was great!!!

please make another one... its the best story i ever read!!!! loved it

That was really great, best story I read so far on here, if I could i'd give you 100,000,000 but it sadly only goes up too 5 :(

Totally awesome.

Very good authorship.

best thing i've read here...masterful

I'm not usually a fan of interactive stories but i decided to do one today. glad I did. it was good :D

That was wonderful, would have loved if you included anal and ass to mouth as these acts seem to be very main streem in the adult industry now.

Awesome...so much cocksucking...delicious

holy crap that was a good read...my imagination went wild :)

More please

I enjoyed getting to choose what happened and also the amount of detail you put into each of the options. try to stretch out the sex for longer though, at least I would prefer if you did.

When I was a kid I loved choose your own adventure books. Now that I'm an adult I love erotica, I figured this would be a great combination, not this one. I will try another story, but this one was terrible.

Very good i really enjoyed it

excellent

first experience to inactive story. just awful.

It was okay, but the cock sucking got REALLY old. Throw some other shit in next time!

how about some oral for HER?? and some more variety in everything, not just blowjobs every page... it gets really boring

you are incredible! Your storylines are brilliant and the sex scenes are all so hot!

soooo hot

Oh, and one other thing. What a tremendous amount of work on your part. Thanks!

Very creative, I've never read one like this before. Some parts were very interesting, fun, and sexy. Wish for more appealing characters: masculine, dominant, but honorable and respectful men; and beautiful, less bimbo females-- but hey, it's Literotica after all.

Please do another interactive story, that was fun. I loved all the oral in there too. However, make the women more realistically dominant next time, they were way too submissive to believe.

i'm so tired of all these stories with such ass hole men and the women just taking it. fuck that!

pretty good, but it was a little repetitive...

It is very good and the only complated interactive story theat i read , keep wrigting complated interactive story and i will keep reading them .

ps. sorry for my englis .

Fine piece of work... Nicely interwoven...

It was a great story, totally sexy, but I think a little more detailed downright fucking might be in order.

The unrealistic combat was a total turn-off for me. I like a girl who knows how to kick ass, not just throw table knives and duck around punches.

My gods: the incompetence.

Also: Why are all the guys in the story undesirable? Work some hot ones in there, please?

Best story on literotica hands down shot ropes

Of cum all over my wall readin it

Very good read at least i know just whati'd do...lmao

I was reading and had to cum so bad!! I needed to cum on someones face but no one was around. I was forced to lay down put my legs in the air and jerk myself with my cock only inches from my own face! I started cumming and gave myself a facial. My girlfriend started clapping when I stood up, she asked if this is what I always did when she wasn't around! I was embarassed but I learned she liked it and licked the cum off my face! Thanks to your story I was able to have this adventure!!

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