All Comments on 'Back to the South Ch. 06'

Liking the series but surely you can include some girl on girl. Maybe in the same household. Maybe while they share one of the slaves.

No girl on girl keep just like you have it.65

Great writing still but my main focus is on the Peterson . I am waiting for them to comeback.

Too much black on black. I'm not really interested in the slave women getting their own sex scenes. I want to see more hung slaves bedding their white female masters.

This story is rapidly gaining more characters than war and peace, which can make things a little confusing.

How about adding some young white girl just turning legal age and curious about black sex like walking into the slave barn and after seeing a much older slave with gray hair napping away for some rest on the hayloft and curiously the girl saw his thick and heavy meaty black cock sticking out of his trouser of course your virginal young girl can't help herself and try as she might can't take her eyes off it and started to get a closer look and finally started touching it and it grew thicker and thicker..well you're the story teller I'm sure you can finish the rest..thank you

This story really went off on a tangent, and quite frankly it feels like it is rambling right now. Even if you were to bring it back to the Peterson's it would still ask the question what the hell was the point of the last two or three chapters.

Focus it back on what you started with, save the rest of these characters for a different story.

Really have gotten away from the original characters, circle back to them much earlier or there story is pretty much not needed

what bothered me about this is the constant fucking by black cock ... no darkies ever eating pussy, sucking on clitties ... it get boring ... who wrote this a black individual??? it's really boring ....