All Comments on 'Backpacking'

by Jerzzon

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Mkcb69Mkcb69about 2 years ago

Such a brilliant, tenderly written, story. Realky, really enjoyed it! We need a sequel.... 😁

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 2 years ago

What a beautiful story of loving siblings. I really enjoyed this tale. Thank you and please keep writing.

YampowerYampowerabout 2 years ago

Beautiful story well written and lovely slow build up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story of showing the love between siblings

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Perfect.

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A beautiful story about seeing the person inside, not caring about the outside. We are all broken in some way. Thank you!

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 years ago

Bizarre, but very nice. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Too close to home and I had to stop reading it, but a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very sweet

sp9983sp9983about 2 years ago

Too drawn out and boring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

pretty damn good. not the best but you definitely have potential.

4 stars. thank you for this and please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I liked it very much.

barny109barny109about 2 years ago

really enjoyed your story and i hope to read more about these two in the future. 5*

HDblackheartHDblackheartabout 2 years ago

This story is really sweet but I couldn't finish the first page I'd highly change your narrative style a bit... For an erotic tale this story starts out way to negative for me to get into it that way even if I could finish this story I wouldn't be able to enjoy it like a regular erotic story as I can't get past the sad fact you created a character that had no legs and then had her get in a car accident making her loose and arm on top of that

clearcreekclearcreekabout 2 years ago

it was much better than I expected.

rflatstonerflatstoneabout 2 years ago

I really hope there is a Part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

most amazing sex I have read about in a longtime... But I am an SAK fan....would love to see her cruthing and wiggling her stump. hmmmm did not hear stump once.

JacktacularJacktacular9 months ago

Fucking beautiful ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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