All Comments on 'Backrubs'

Solid story and I liked the balance between narrative and dialogue. For some reason, the sex scenes did not merge well with the rest of the story. In some ways they felt like stand alone events within a romance story. Wish I could explain better so you could improve your craft, but hard to describe. Maybe it's because I have daughters, but I would have been more comfortable if the entire age, stage of life, for our MCs was four years further in the future. I really liked the ending. 4.2*

Very interesting story!

5

You certainly achieved your goal of developing characters while telling an erotic tale at the same time. Its a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it.

Beautiful love story and lovely development ending with the characters and their stories. Sometimes the children do have to stand up to their parents for what they believe in to get what they want and what they believe they deserve. Great story, I loved it!