All Comments on 'Backstage at His Concert'

Oh yeah...this could be good. Passion plus time equals sizzle! Please give us the sizzle!

I’m sorry! I loved your story. And I clicked one star by mistake. I’ll see if I can logout and give it five stars to at least partly redeem myself 😦.

There is a freshness to your writing - an insecurity on the surface of your characters that feels like it’s covering a deep darkness underneath. Everything feels dangerous. Love it. Such a strong feeling your characters are dancing around each other’s intensity but want to rip their clothes off and do their worst. It feels like you’ve lived it. Will you be writing more?

Aww thank you guys for your kind feedback. This scene is part of a book I wrote, I am in the process of cleaning it up to republish, I can post some more :) I wasn’t sure if small bites would stand alone ok, glad you had fun reading it!

Wow this is so hot, and so dark - I would love to read more!

The way you write is very evocative, different to what I usually read here.