by thisgirlistrouble
loved how you turned the wife around, I thought she was going to be the ball breaker but you brought her to a better level.
Thanks for taking the time to write for us.
Not as hot as the first part. I get the feeling this wasn't as well planned out. More foreplay, as it were, between Mrs Reid and Kim would help.
Can see this as a good transition into more adventures...take the babysitter on vacation...etc. would love to see the girls in some facial/cum swapping action.
The story needs to be proof read first before submitting, example in one spot "of" is use when it should have been "off," what others are in the story?
To adjust my original overrated score.
Two problems:
1) why was wife mad???
2) how did wife find out about babysitter and hub???
answers to both would have helped develop deeper understanding of story